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Nightwolf
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Post subject: Opposite Worlds Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2008 9:59 am |
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Joined: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:04 am Posts: 902 Location: Puyallup, Washington
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I wrote this while sitting on the steps, looking at the gray sky today. Heh. I stretched it out a bit, but it's poetry, so shush and read on.
Opposite Worlds
Here I see a day sky, there you see twilight Here I have my day dreams, while yours take the night I am getting ready, while you're getting undressed I will hear good day, and you'll hear good rest Two worlds divided and yet they're just the same Separated Countries, by more than just a name Eight Hours difference, A fascinating thing And when it's time to switch sides, my heart begins to sing The darkness comes to greet me, Feral instincts start to rise It's time to finally shed my humanly disguise A long day of work, rewards with one last test Do I have the patience for friends who are the best To wake to their morning and say Hello to me Yes I do, I think and wait most curiously For Who will come on first, To whom Do I say Hi? Will it be enough time before we say goodbye? For in their topsy turvy lives, their world is waking up And mine will soon be ending as my tired eyes fall shut Only to awake again to repeat history Where I will see the light and they will be asleep
_________________ "First time you're a guest; we'll get it for you. Second time you're a friend and we'll show you where to find it. Third time, you're family so get it your damned self." The mage ^_^
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Black_Rose
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Post subject: Re: Opposite Worlds Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:08 pm |
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| Giant Orange |
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Joined: Sun Jan 27, 2008 11:26 am Posts: 1047 Location: London
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That's a very nice poem..i like the rhythm and flow of it
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Nightwolf
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Post subject: Re: Opposite Worlds Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:35 am |
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| Baby Orange |
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Joined: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:04 am Posts: 902 Location: Puyallup, Washington
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*Grins* Yeah and for once was not a gloomy poem. Okay not for once, but not another gloomy one  BTW, Twas inspired by all my crazy friends with an 8 hour time difference or different time zone 
_________________ "First time you're a guest; we'll get it for you. Second time you're a friend and we'll show you where to find it. Third time, you're family so get it your damned self." The mage ^_^
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Zan
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Post subject: Re: Opposite Worlds Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:56 pm |
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| Not-So-Giant Orange |
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Joined: Wed Jan 30, 2008 9:15 am Posts: 443
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Crazy foreigners!
_________________ "I think a man does what he can, until his destiny is revealed."
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Nightwolf
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Post subject: Re: Opposite Worlds Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 10:41 am |
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| Baby Orange |
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Joined: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:04 am Posts: 902 Location: Puyallup, Washington
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*Grins sweetly* Yeah, you foreigners are crazy, but that's what I like about ya  And just realized, that from one perspective to another, we're all foreigners. Heh
_________________ "First time you're a guest; we'll get it for you. Second time you're a friend and we'll show you where to find it. Third time, you're family so get it your damned self." The mage ^_^
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Snaps
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Post subject: Re: Opposite Worlds Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:27 am |
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| Giant Orange |
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Joined: Sun Feb 24, 2008 12:59 pm Posts: 252 Location: Southern Ontario, Canada
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I really appreciate poetry that has good rhythm and rhyme, good job ^ v ^ .
I can really relate to this poem. I wouldn't want it any other way.
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Nightwolf
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Post subject: Re: Opposite Worlds Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:55 am |
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Joined: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:04 am Posts: 902 Location: Puyallup, Washington
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*Smiles* Yay, twas made for my friends to enjoy 
_________________ "First time you're a guest; we'll get it for you. Second time you're a friend and we'll show you where to find it. Third time, you're family so get it your damned self." The mage ^_^
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