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Xilthanas
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Post subject: Things I Should Have Said  Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 4:56 pm |
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Joined: Tue Feb 12, 2008 8:58 am
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Location: Bremerton, WA
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I know its too late
That I can't have you now
It does me no good
To look back and go over
Things I should have said
I want you
I need you
I love you
I feel like I'm dying
Without you beside me
So I'll lay in bed
(where you should be)
And I'll wail and rail
Crying out for what should have been
(Will you come back to me?)
Hold me
Kiss me
Soothe me
Love me
I wish I could have
Begged you to stay
But now I'll never
Hold you close again
As I slowly die inside
I go through those things
I should have said again
I want you
I need you
I love you
I feel like I'm dying
Without you beside me
Hold me
Kiss me
Soothe me
Love me
I wish I could have
Begged you to stay
But instead I look
Down the barrel of a gun
And remember brighter days
Right before I-- (gunfires)
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Purplemoon
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:21 pm |
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Joined: Mon Feb 11, 2008 9:06 pm
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wow - rings very true for me right now!
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Xilthanas
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:22 am |
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Joined: Tue Feb 12, 2008 8:58 am
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Location: Bremerton, WA
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A friend of mine once said, "As long as you don't ever think about the result of suicide, you won't ever go through with it." Most suicide attempts fail because of second guessing.
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Vixen
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:56 am |
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Joined: Thu Feb 07, 2008 6:16 pm
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Location: Ass deep in enemies, ankle deep in friends.
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thats a great poem, sounds almost like a song lyric
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I can breathe again, dream again
I'll be on the road again
Like it used to be the other day
Now I feel free again, so innocent
Cause someone makes me whole again for sure
I'll find another you
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Xilthanas
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 2:56 pm |
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Location: Bremerton, WA
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It is actually. All of the ones I posted, aside from Luna's Garden, are actually song lyrics. Or atleast are intended as such.
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Nightwolf
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 12:12 pm |
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Joined: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:04 am
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Location: Puyallup, Washington
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I noticed that the others looked more like song lyrics than poetry like luna's garden.
It almost made me want to be like, could I hear it first, then maybe feel emotion behind the song, but thought was meant for poetry purpose so was quiet. 
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Black_Rose
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 12:32 pm |
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Joined: Sun Jan 27, 2008 11:26 am
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Location: London
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yes it sounds very song like to me..it's very emotional
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