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Xilthanas
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Post subject: Swords of Fire  Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:36 am |
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Location: Bremerton, WA
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I can see them
Flaring in the chaos
Cleaving down those
Who stand against us
The swords of fire
Smite our foes
Set them aflame
And send them unto death
None can stand
Against these swords
These blades of flame
Burn like our hearts fire
Acting as beacons in the dark
For our compatriots that have
Already passed on
Calling them to fight once more
To stand with us again
And raise their own blades
Swords that still burn
With their hearts flame
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Black_Rose
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Post subject: Re: Swords of Fire Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 12:12 pm |
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Joined: Sun Jan 27, 2008 11:26 am
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Location: London
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i like this poem...good use of imagery
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Xilthanas
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Post subject: Re: Swords of Fire Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 1:59 pm |
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Thanks. It actually kind of feels like its part of a series to me. It just doesn't feel done to me. I hate it when that happens...
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Zan
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Post subject: Re: Swords of Fire Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:10 pm |
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Very nice and it doesn't feel like it's complete no. It feels like the beginning of a big epic battle 
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Xilthanas
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Post subject: Re: Swords of Fire Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 2:19 pm |
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I kind of thought so myself. Hopefully I'll get some more inspiration soon and complete the run. I'd like to see where it ends.
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Black_Rose
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Post subject: Re: Swords of Fire Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 5:07 pm |
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yeah i'd like to see where it goes as well  theres a scrollbar in your post zan o.O
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Zan
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Post subject: Re: Swords of Fire Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:17 pm |
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I don't see any scrollbars ...
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Post subject: Re: Swords of Fire Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 5:27 pm |
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i do  ...and now its gone cuz i edited it and removed the full stop
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